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Post by kentarotakahashi on Aug 8, 2012 17:20:10 GMT -5
SUB-FLAMES, ABILITIES, and ILLUSIONS NAME OF RECIPIENT: Kentaro Takahashi ITEM NAME: Box Weapon #1 Ability #1 ITEM DESCRIPTION:
Snake Bite-Morso Di Serpente
Ken infuses sky flames into his 'snake mode' sword, completely covering it. He then lengthens the blade to its limit, as the last segment of the blade splits into what looks like fangs and pierces his opponent propelled by hard flames. From here, the opponent is infused with sky flames where it harmonizes with the person's flames and absorbs it through the blade, making it so that the opponent feels slightly weakened. Though a person will a strong enough flame could over come it with lessened effects
Duration: 2 posts Cooldown: 3 posts
TOTAL: Free
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SUB-FLAMES, ABILITIES, and ILLUSIONS NAME OF RECIPIENT: Kentaro Takahashi ITEM NAME: Main Flame Ability #2 ITEM DESCRIPTION:
Comet Smash- Cometa Frantumare
Ken covers his arm in soft sky flames, and covers his fist in hard sky flames, the soft flames being the tail of the comet and the hard flames being the ball. After this has been done, he rushes towards his opponent and attacks with a punch, strong enough to break boulders and concrete. Rain flames could douse these flames if they are strong enough. Also storm flames could disperse his punch and could also leave his hand burning.
Cooldown: 3 posts
TOTAL: 75f
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SUB-FLAMES, ABILITIES, and ILLUSIONS NAME OF RECIPIENT: Kentaro Takahashi ITEM NAME: Sub-Flame #1 Ability # 1 ITEM DESCRIPTION: Storm Flame: By using the Disintegration aspect of the storm flame, Ken can increase the attack power of his attacks and increase the defensive qualities as well.
Meteora Accelerato- Meteor Crash
Ken raises his hand either towards his opponent or in the air overhead. He then releases about 6 streams of storm flames. Lastly they either come down like a shower being hit from above, or hit the enemy multiple time when released forward.
Cooldown: 3 posts TOTAL: 125f
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Post by darkwings on Aug 9, 2012 21:34:21 GMT -5
Problem with your box weapon ability is that Sky flames don't nullify flames. They Harmonize, though.
Second problem is that travelling at light speed is... kinda no. I mean, you could have it propelled by hard flames, but that wouldn't cause "light speed travel".
Rain flames aren't the only things that could disrupt your abilities. Storm flames do similar, but violent.
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Post by kentarotakahashi on Aug 9, 2012 22:11:43 GMT -5
edited
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Post by darkwings on Aug 10, 2012 11:52:16 GMT -5
Completely missed this first time through, I'll admit, but how does your main flame really effect your subflame ability? It just seems like it's a storm ability and you had to have sky flames in it.
What would your "absorption" of flames actually do?
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Post by kentarotakahashi on Aug 11, 2012 7:11:31 GMT -5
edited. hopefully XD
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Post by darkwings on Aug 11, 2012 22:22:56 GMT -5
You completely missed my point about the storm sub ability. I wanted to know how your storm subflame enhanced your main flame in some way, you know? It doesn't have to enhance a preexisting ability, don't get me wrong, but now it is very literally, just a storm flame ability.
With that, I can't honestly think of a time where Sky flames worked like how you want them to. Sometimes the vagueness really works against the flame.
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Post by kentarotakahashi on Aug 12, 2012 1:57:28 GMT -5
about the storm flame, i thought that it was just supposed to be a really powered down 'flames of wrath' type deal, just without the destroying everything to ashes I thought that absorption and nullification was kind of like a sub trait to harmony, which was why Tsuna's could do his Zero Point Breakthrough. Both the freezing and absorption technique are examples of nullification. Another example is Byakuran's White Applause, being able to render flame attacks useless, but still a nullification attack. sorry if this is getting you frustrated, that was really not my intent
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Post by darkwings on Aug 12, 2012 20:36:20 GMT -5
No worries about it getting frustrating, I don't let reviews get to me unless the person just argues for the sake of arguing.
It would technically be a "Flames of Wrath" type scenario, but it still wouldn't just be streams of storm flames, as you have it, you see? It'd be majority Sky flames with some storm thrown in for a side effect type deal. I just want to know how they work together in your mind, I know how they should work out and you might prove a different way to me.
To do with the sky ability, I can see sorta what you mean, but in reference to Tsuna's Zero Point Breakthrough, are we talking Revised or First Edition. They do critically different things. And Byakuran's White Applause only negates an oncoming attack.
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