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Post by ABELE VON CONSTANTINI on Jan 7, 2013 20:44:11 GMT -5
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► ABELE VON COSTANTINI
Blonde Devil
► AGE: 27; February 29th. ► GENDER: Male ► SEXUALITY: Pansexual ► ETHNICITY: Italian ► FACTION: Spiagga ► OCCUPATION: Puppet head of the Costantini family - meaning while he currently is not their official leader, he is the true leader behind the current one.
► personality
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► PERSONALITY► POSITIVE TRAITS- Calm
- Charismatic
- Honest
- Mature
- Intelligent
- Tolerant
► NEGATIVE TRAITS- Manipulative
- Cruel
- Cunning
- Arrogant
- Selfish
- Over confident
► LIKES
- Reading
- Things going as planned
- Indiana Curry
- Takehiko
► DISLIKES- Things getting in his way to his goal
- People who don't listen
- People more arrogant then him
- Cooking
► misc info
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Growing up in a Mafia family, Abele has been exposed to it for years, was practically GROOMED into it as to take the head of the Constantini family. As the oldest born from his other two siblings he is use to having the best, but is a rather...twisted individual. As a child he had a servant, one that he was fond of, one that he crafted to be his perfect tool, a bodyguard. They were always around one another ever since they were children, it wasn't a surprised that Abele was get so possessive of him as they grew even grew to love him in his own twisted way. So when he returned from a meeting to find him gone he was furious at his father for selling something that Abele considered his own possession.
After his possession was sold to the Vongola mafia family, he waited until the death of his father eight years later. His father had been ill for some time during the last year or so of his life, so when he did pass, it wasn't surprising. This left Abele at the head of the Constantini family...There was one thing he needed to do before he truly took over and that was find his precious pet. A boss needed a bodyguard, after all. Leaving one of his siblings in charge - one who already knew who the true boss was - he joined the Spiaggia mafia family. The Spiaggia were rather well-known in the mafia world and with their ties as well as the Mare Rings he could be able to find Takehiko. Now he's found his slave and though he hasn't approached him he has been watching, always watching, but soon watching just isn't going to be enough anymore. He has his own plans concerning the Vongola, but he's going to need certain pieces before he can make a move, but that's okay, Abele is a patient person, till then, he'll just have a bit of fun. Whether it be with his precious toy or his new ones in the Spiaggia family.
► inventory check
"Blond Devil"
► AFFILIATION Spiaggia Sky Guardian
► ALIGNMENTChaotic Neutral - however, his true intentions are far from neutral. His current one is more of a front than anything. ► FLAME ATTRIBUTE & ABILITIESSky Flames Abele is rather proud of his ability, one that he developed over years of manipulation. Abele's ability is to nullify other flames with his own harmonization factor. Of course there is faults, he can only cancel out a flame of equal amount or higher to the other flame, at best he can only nullify a small portion of it out to reduce the power of it somewhat if its too big for him to nullify at once. It is also rather difficult to measure the amount of flames that one may use. Stronger attacks may cause damage to his hands and to his person as well. The idea of flame nullification is the harmonization factor - where many may absorb the flames that they have harmonized into their body - Abele has decided against that and merely harmonizes the same amount of flames as the attack and lets the neutralized flames float harmlessly into the air.
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► BOX WEAPON N/A
► BOX ANIMALN/A ► EQUIPMENTSky Flame Battery Box. ► MISCELLANEOUS ITEMSN/A
► general information
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► OTHER CHARACTERS N/A ► FACECLAIM
★ [b]hakuouki shinsengumi kitan[/b], [i]chikage kazama[/i] – abele von constantini
► I, "TWICHAN", AGREEthat i have read the rules and other such items and will stick to them. i will keep to the minimum post size and stay active. i also understand that if i fail to stay active my character will be deleted and my account, if completely inactive, will be removed from the forums. ► CREDITOriginal Credit for the application goes to Allie of On the Edge. The application icon credit goes to ceres_wish [rainniedays] of livejournal. |
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SPOT
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Post by SPOT on Jan 8, 2013 12:07:42 GMT -5
[STYLE=font-family: yanone kaffeesatz; color: 9db8c1; font-size: 30px; text-align: center;]HOLD UP![/style][STYLE=background-color:dddddd; font-family: tahoma; font-size: 10px; text-align: justify; width: 400px; border-left: 6px solid #9db8c1; color: 333131; padding: 10px; border-radius: 0px 15px 15px 0px; -moz-border-radius: 0px 0px 15px 15px;] I'm sorry to say that there are multiple things here that need tweaking so we can get you on your way to rping. The first thing thats bothering me is the alignment. Now what I mean by alignment is where your character sides himself; you have that he is the boss of his own family, but you also have him as a Sky Guardian of Spiaggia, I'm sorry but this is not going to work. Please choose between either Spiaggia or your own Famiglia, but not both. Yes there has been cases of interfamily mixing where you have low tier members of one family being a guardian of another family, but there never has been a boss doing this. Canonwise, Dino is not a part of the Vongola simply an aide/ally to them. In the case of Lambo, he was such a failure of a hitman, and so low on the totem pole that the Bovino Famiglia pretty much gave him away to Vongola. So yea simply put choose between either Spiaggia or your own Famiglia, If you wanted to do both the only way you could do it is to be a nobody in the other family; just a low level grunt that wouldn't be missed if placed in another Famiglia. Also theres a problem with your character's actual alignment. If you look you'll see al of the Spiagga members are in the "Chaotic" area, with most of them leaning towards Chaotic Good. With this in mind I dont think a Neutral Evil amongst all the Chaotic Good Spiaggia would be a good match as that Famiglia isnt exactly evil. Okay now then your history really threw me for a loop, and I didnt clearly understand it until i read Tsuki's character request. You'd need to really flesh this out, and expand on it. Ok yeah, you're taking a requested character but that does not mean you cannot make this character yours. Also you'd need to expand on points such as the sudden mentioning of the Vongola, or how his father had some sort of condition for him to join Spiagga. Both of these points are completely random, and have no clear explanation as there is no prior mentioning of them, or any given purpose. Lastly your abilities.. Honestly it is pretty odd for a Mafioso to only have an ability, not to mention your ability i'm pretty iffy on. I really dont see a person being able to be a proper boss without havving a box weapon, or a box animal. I'm gonna be blunt its gonna be a no from me on the nullification ability, I can see that you got the idea from Byakuran's White Applause ability, and thats one of the reasons I'm going to have to say no. I just dont see that as a natural ability of Sky Flames, and the closest flame I could to possibly doing that is maybe Rain Flames. Basicly rethink your flame ability, and come up with a box weapn/animal. To summarize,,, - Decide between your family, and Spiagga
- Flesh out, and amend your history depending on your choice of famgilia
- Change your flame ability, and add a box weapon and animal.
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Post by Kaya on Feb 11, 2013 23:31:21 GMT -5
Accepted!
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